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Title: For They Shall See God
Characters: Cindy, Lennon, The Temple
Rating: PG
Words: 525
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: It’s like no other place she’s ever been and Cindy has been to many places.
A/N: Written for Queen [livejournal.com profile] that_evening who asked for The Others and The Temple.

The Temple is full of echoes at night, the sound of water dripping and churning is inescapable. Cindy loves it, she lies awake and listens to every creek and hum and imagines the building is alive around her.

Since the first day she set foot inside the Temple, she’s felt it. There’s an energy here, a charge that’s almost electric. It’s like no other place she’s ever been and Cindy has been to many places.

Her homeland Australia, the chaotic streets of New York, and London at dawn---she used to circle the globe, landing in a different country every night. Her mother said she had a case of wanderlust, that it was a phase she would outgrow. But Cindy knew it was something else. She’s always been searching, searching for this.

The children sleep beside her. They’ve grown so much since the crash. They don’t ask after their parents anymore, at least not so Cindy can hear. She’s stopped feeling guilty about keeping them here, about not bothering to try to get them home. This is home now. They were chosen for something more. A gift like that shouldn’t be squandered.

Restless, Cindy leaves the children to their dreams and walks the quiet halls. She smiles at each of the night guards as she passes them. She doesn’t envy them their task. She’s seen the monster on occasion, never as the others have in all of its ferocity, but she’s heard the stories. Lennon whispers them to her from across the campfire sometimes and she watches the reflection of the flames flicker in his glasses. It reminds her of the fire and brimstone speeches she used to hear on Sundays, only she knows these are true, never feels that nagging sense of doubt that haunted her after every sermon.

Lennon isn’t by the fire tonight, so Cindy circles back inside and finds herself staring into the murky waters of the stream.

She was cautioned not to touch it, they all were. She heard Lennon and Dogen talking earlier; there was an edge of worry in their voices. Change is coming, Cindy can feel it.

She leans down and lets her fingers tread the top of the water. She pulls back quickly expecting it to burn. Nothing happens. The pool continues on and her hand is merely wet.

Still she believes.

There is power in this place, in these ancient stones with their incomprehensible carvings.

There is meaning, even if she isn’t sure what the meaning is yet. She’s a part of this place, of these people; it’s all connected.

She settles herself by the pool and closes her eyes. She listens to the steady trickle of the stream, feels the rough edge of stone beneath her fingertips. A breeze blows through the open door and catches her hair, leaving a ghost of whispers in its wake.

If change is coming it won’t reach them tonight.

Cindy leans back against a column and lets the familiar rhythms of the Temple wash over her, gently lulling her to sleep.

Before she drifts off, Cindy says a silent prayer of thanks to a god she’ll never meet.

Date: 7/8/10 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cloudytea.livejournal.com
This is so beautiful, especially how you describe how Cindy was always searching for something. ♥

Date: 7/8/10 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozmissage.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :)

Date: 7/8/10 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greedyslayer.livejournal.com
I love how you wrote that feeling I had upon seeing Cindy back in the Temple--how I totally believed she had a strong connection to the Temple and the Island, though I didn't have the details. I definitely bought the theories that she was an Other all along more.

Date: 7/8/10 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozmissage.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I was wary of writing Cindy because honestly I haven't thought about her very much, but I thought I'd give it a shot. :)

Date: 7/8/10 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hitlikehammers.livejournal.com
This is desperately gorgeous: atmospheric, really, and the pacing and the language both are so lush and vivid -- it's absolutely lovely.

Date: 7/8/10 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozmissage.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :D

Date: 7/8/10 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knopflergroupie.livejournal.com
This is so pretty. I love the idea that Cindy has a connection to the Island. (I mean, she probably does, right? If she managed to survive for so long?) Nice work.

Date: 7/8/10 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozmissage.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you! :)

Cindy's always been a mystery to me, I figure she must feel some sort of connection to the place because she seemed pretty happy to be there.

Date: 7/8/10 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bittersweet325.livejournal.com
I really love your take on Cindy. Well done!

Date: 7/8/10 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozmissage.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 7/8/10 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mollivanders.livejournal.com
this is lovely, dear, the way you describe her night walks and the children - the part about her wanderlust, and not trying to get the children home anymore :)

Date: 7/9/10 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozmissage.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Cindy is not a character I've thought very much about, but it was fun to try to get inside of her head for awhile. :)

Date: 7/9/10 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joyyjpg.livejournal.com
Gah, this is so good. It has such a great atmosphere to it - kind of haunting, in a way, because Cindy seems to in-tune with the island and it's power even if she doens't fully understand it. I'll admit to not really giving Cindy much thought, but you definitely bring something different to her character here and I love it. :)

Date: 7/9/10 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozmissage.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

I honestly haven't thought much about Cindy either, but I'd thought even less about Dogen so I figured I'd give her a shot. ;)

Date: 7/9/10 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valhalla37.livejournal.com
This is indescribably gorgeous. I love how you take a character with so little backstory and so little connection to the main plot (not in a bad way, but still) and flesh her out so well; the mentioned of Zack and Emma are especially poignant, in the belief they've all be chosen for something better. Wonderful!

Date: 7/11/10 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozmissage.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Cindy isn't someone I've thought much about so it was interesting trying to find some sort of motivation for her. Honestly, I've always found her kind of baffling so it was fun to try to get in her head a little bit. :)

Date: 7/10/10 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] that-evening.livejournal.com
This is gorgeous. Wow, I never expected so many great results from my request. Thank you so much for writing this. :)

Date: 7/11/10 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozmissage.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

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