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Title: Can’t Stop a Caged Bird from Singing
Rating: PG
Characters: Adelle, Caroline
Words: 318
Disclaimer: Not mine.
A/N: Written for[info]still_grr prompt: 136 (Needs-the resolution)

Adelle can’t help but admire Caroline, even as she recognizes her naivety. People always believe that they need only to fling open the cage door to set something free. They don’t think about what happens after, what it truly means to release something into the wild. Unwitting creatures that are used to being fed now have to find food for themselves. Creatures that once lived in controlled environments are now faced with the abstract idea of danger.

Caroline calls what Adelle does inhumane, but she doesn’t understand. She has the luxuries of youth and idealism to fall back on. Adelle knows this world and she knows it is not good to the weak. What humanity is there in throwing defenseless creatures to the wolves?

Adelle allows Caroline to play the part of Moses as she leads her people out into the promise land of the car park. She knows Caroline believes herself to be their savior, although the dolls show no sign of gratitude. They stare up at the sun as placidly as they gaze at the pool. This means nothing to them.

Luckily for Adelle it means something to Caroline. The sound of a body hitting pavement makes Adelle turn. Caroline is crumpled on the ground behind her, her need satisfied for now. The guards are already herding their flock back to the safety of the house. Adelle watches as one of them scoops Caroline into his arms.

When she wakes up she’ll be Echo again, as blank and empty as the rest. Adelle can’t help but think it’s only temporary though. Most caged things don’t know enough to yearn for their freedom, but Caroline is different. Always has been. She’s screaming for it and Adelle is not naïve enough to believe this will put an end to it. She knows if she ever opens the cage again Caroline won’t allow herself to be put back in.

Date: 10/13/09 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sedauny.livejournal.com
People always believe that they need only to fling open the cage door to set something free. They don’t think about what happens after,
Very true, and very Adelle-like. She's the predator at heart, isn't she? And Caroline, especially, doesn't think beyond saving, as we saw when she wanted to save all the lab animals, despite not knowing what health problems they had been given and what they needed to survive what had been done to them. She'd do it all again, even to the getting caught, but Adelle finds her fascinating. Is it Echo's very ability to glitch reliably that interests Adelle? It would tie in with her desire to save and to be free, and with Adelle's refusal to send Echo to the attic, and eventually with Echo's ability to retain and integrate her many imprints that will save her and everyone in Epitaph One. Back to the story, that second paragraph sums up Adelle nicely. Youth and idealism as luxuries, the metaphor of throwing the defenseless to the wolves--and to Adelle, the dolls are all defenseless and innocent now, no matter how wolfish they might have been when they signed up (think of Alpha's criminal past, or the many mug-shots in the FBI database for Madeline). Adelle is a wolf trying to be a sheepdog--really trying, while knowing the pleasure of the hunt--and envying Caroline's effortless and un-ironic desire to save and guard.

Date: 10/13/09 03:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozmissage.livejournal.com
Your feedback always fills me with glee and I love the point you made about the how some of the dolls were wolfish when they signed (that's not something I had thought of myself). Thank you so much for reading and leaving such incredible feedback! :)

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