I'm not a Jack/Kate fan, (which you, uh, may have noticed), but I can appreciate that they are one of the most tragic couples on the show, and you've captured that magnificently here. And this:
This time the smile is real, she can always tell. She smiles back
breaks my heart. And that she's lying in her bed, practicing telling him to go, is so believable and sad. Fantastic ficlet.
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Date: 8/19/10 05:19 am (UTC)This time the smile is real, she can always tell. She smiles back
breaks my heart. And that she's lying in her bed, practicing telling him to go, is so believable and sad. Fantastic ficlet.