wow, this is just so haunted. at some point she has to tell him but this limbo is so very them - I think you capture some of the most poignant aspects of their relationship in the three years off the island.
She’s not sure what exactly it is she wants him to stop doing. Drinking, fading, fighting---the door opens and she feels the bed dip as he sinks down beside her.
and just like that, moment by moment, you pull the two halves of the story together :) I also like how you added aaron here (there, in the background, but there). he's always a hard character for me to write. lovely fic!
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Date: 8/19/10 04:47 am (UTC)She’s not sure what exactly it is she wants him to stop doing. Drinking, fading, fighting---the door opens and she feels the bed dip as he sinks down beside her.
and just like that, moment by moment, you pull the two halves of the story together :) I also like how you added aaron here (there, in the background, but there). he's always a hard character for me to write. lovely fic!