Thank you so, so much! Seriously, your feedback made me so incredibly happy.
Miles is totally a player. There's something about his smartassery that makes me think he would be a hard guy to resist. Then again that could be my snark kink talking.
She really does think of him as the DUckie, and strangely the more she gets to know him (like the conversation in the bed), the more that seems to be true for her. That happens in real life; the more you get to know someone and like them as a person, the less of a crush you'll ever have on them.
That was exactly what I was going for. I really wanted it to come through that this was pretty one sided on his part. Juliet certainly cares for him, but her heart is elsewhere. Poor Miles, I hated that I couldn't give him the girl...but that would have provided me with a lot less snark potential. ;)
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Date: 11/19/09 11:35 pm (UTC)Thank you so, so much! Seriously, your feedback made me so incredibly happy.
Miles is totally a player. There's something about his smartassery that makes me think he would be a hard guy to resist. Then again that could be my snark kink talking.
She really does think of him as the DUckie, and strangely the more she gets to know him (like the conversation in the bed), the more that seems to be true for her. That happens in real life; the more you get to know someone and like them as a person, the less of a crush you'll ever have on them.
That was exactly what I was going for. I really wanted it to come through that this was pretty one sided on his part. Juliet certainly cares for him, but her heart is elsewhere. Poor Miles, I hated that I couldn't give him the girl...but that would have provided me with a lot less snark potential. ;)