what a fantastic story! I laughed hard reading this - your narrations is perfect, and your Miles voice is spot on.
this part is hilarious: "He looks down at his boxers and groans; it looks like a certain part of him didn’t get the memo" Ha! good one.
And this: "One night he commandeers the bed from Daniel because really it’s been over a month and the guy can only play the my-girlfriend-died-from-overexposure-to-time-traveling card for so long"
Your Miles is very IC - pretending not to care or even LIKE anybody, but there's this second emotional layer that he hides - and it's certainly there. And I imagine Miles would have a crush on a girl like Juliet. well, who would't anyway?
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Date: 11/18/09 04:41 pm (UTC)this part is hilarious: "He looks down at his boxers and groans; it looks like a certain part of him didn’t get the memo" Ha! good one.
And this: "One night he commandeers the bed from Daniel because really it’s been over a month and the guy can only play the my-girlfriend-died-from-overexposure-to-time-traveling card for so long"
Your Miles is very IC - pretending not to care or even LIKE anybody, but there's this second emotional layer that he hides - and it's certainly there. And I imagine Miles would have a crush on a girl like Juliet. well, who would't anyway?
great job as always! you totally made my day :)