OMG, THANK YOU! This was such a surprise, and so exactly everything I love.
He’ll never feel hers. This is always going to piss him off. I love how you are able to write these very angsty concepts in a really fun and lighthearted way. I think that's also a strength of writing from the POV of someone like Miles. And you write the BEST Miles, but I think you already knew that. ;)
Then again he was pretty sure there was no such thing as vampires, werewolves, smoke monsters, pissy blond-haired gods, time travel, or good pop songs. Officially the best line ever written in a fanfic. I love it! Lol, Jacob.
He figured he’d find an echo. He found a girl. A girl that laughed in his face. “You can just go back and tell that ungrateful cow that I’m not going anywhere.” He kept Janey’s money anyway, told her some shit about how all sales are final. Then he went back and knocked on Annie’s door. “You can’t exist,” he said by way of greeting. She just shrugged and offered him a cup of tea. Quoted in full because I just adored this part!!!! The rhythm of it was so well-done, and the characterization so good even with so little dialogue. You really feel their relationship and why they'd be into each other and how it's wonderful.
I love the way you found a reason for it to happen (ie., Janey paying Miles to deal with Annie). It's so plausible.
Miles grins, he’s not really used to this yet, this whole having a dead-but-not-really girlfriend and roommates that eat people thing, but he’s getting there. Awwww! This is adorable. They make such a cute pair! Thank you so much for this! You have no idea how much I loved it. <3
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He’ll never feel hers. This is always going to piss him off.
I love how you are able to write these very angsty concepts in a really fun and lighthearted way. I think that's also a strength of writing from the POV of someone like Miles. And you write the BEST Miles, but I think you already knew that. ;)
Then again he was pretty sure there was no such thing as vampires, werewolves, smoke monsters, pissy blond-haired gods, time travel, or good pop songs.
Officially the best line ever written in a fanfic. I love it! Lol, Jacob.
He figured he’d find an echo. He found a girl. A girl that laughed in his face. “You can just go back and tell that ungrateful cow that I’m not going anywhere.” He kept Janey’s money anyway, told her some shit about how all sales are final. Then he went back and knocked on Annie’s door. “You can’t exist,” he said by way of greeting. She just shrugged and offered him a cup of tea.
Quoted in full because I just adored this part!!!! The rhythm of it was so well-done, and the characterization so good even with so little dialogue. You really feel their relationship and why they'd be into each other and how it's wonderful.
I love the way you found a reason for it to happen (ie., Janey paying Miles to deal with Annie). It's so plausible.
Miles grins, he’s not really used to this yet, this whole having a dead-but-not-really girlfriend and roommates that eat people thing, but he’s getting there.
Awwww! This is adorable. They make such a cute pair! Thank you so much for this! You have no idea how much I loved it. <3